Sunday, November 8, 2009

Grammar Blog #8

Before the first page is turned in Invisible Man, the title portrays a core theme. Readers are quick to understand that the narrator is not actually invisible, just invisible in society due to his skin color. Also, the narrator experienced concealed themes as he was a part of many instances of subconscious racial prejudice. He also saw how time and time again the characters he met along the way fit into their classic racial roles, dominated by racial prejudice and oppression against African Americans. These ideas can be found throughout the book within instances of strong white and black imagery that further the major theme: prejudice and racism in America.

The idea becomes quickly apparent that the narrator is living in a world that has been completely dominated by whites. He lives in a basement of an all white building, with bright white lights illuminating his room. he remarks that these bright white lights “confirms my reality, gives birth to my form,” in regards to the narrator being invisible. The white lights show he is human, “a man of substance, of flesh, and bone, fiber and liquids.” The bright white lights serve as white imagery that provides a metaphor to how his life and future experiences will only come under the white race’s power and authority.

Sunday, November 1, 2009

Grammar Blog #7

After elementary school breezed by, I thought I was an excellent student, a math wiz, and on my way to play professional basketball. Similar to many students entering junior high, I quickly found my new school’s experiences to be eye opening. I was not going to play professional basketball, but this was not the high on the list of concerns. My grades were low, and for the first time I saw an F on my report card. This F was also followed by D’s and C’s. To say the least, my parents were not pleased. I just thought that since these grades did not count, there was not very much to worry about, but they did affect me in a more dramatic way than I imagined.

Midway through my seventh grade year the school held basketball tryouts, and despite being just as skilled as the best players, I failed to make the basketball team. In seventh grade, the first year of junior high, not making the basketball team was devastating. The damage of not making the team had very little to do with learning basketball skills, but rather the thought of being shunned from my fellow classmates and friends in a new school. Throughout this unhappy experience, I felt very little support or compassion from my teachers, as the six teachers I had did not have a clue about what was happening in my life. They never took the time to get to know me, or to understand my actions.

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I thought I was an excellent student, a math wiz, and on my way to play professional basketball, after elementary school breezed by. [Participle] Similar to many students entering junior high, I quickly found my new school’s experiences, horrifying and torturous, to be eye opening. [Absolute]. I was not going to play professional basketball, but this was not the high on the list of concerns. My grades were low and for the first time I saw an F on my report card. This F was also followed by D’s and C’s. To say the least, my parents, the masters graduates, were not pleased. [Appositive] I just thought that since these grades did not count, there was not very much to worry about, but they did affect me in a way, more dramatic than I imagined.

Midway through my seventh grade year the school held basketball tryouts, and despite being just as skilled as the best players, I failed to make the basketball team. [Participle]. In seventh grade, the first year of junior high, not making the basketball team was devastating. [Appositive] The damage of not making the team had very little to do with learning basketball skills, but rather the thought of being shunned from my fellow classmates and friends in a new school. Throughout this ult experience, difficult and unhappy, I felt very little support or compassion from my teachers, as the six teachers I had did not have a clue about what was happening in my life. [Adjectives Out of Order]. Never taking the time to get to know me, or to understand my actions, is how my teachers behaved. [Participle]


*I did not know how to get bold to work, but I put the brushstroke at the end of the sentence.